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BSthat bone shattering feeling you get
when you realize you're just not enough for him
that's how it felt
that's how it feels

that heart to the floor,
soaking wet face,
chest caving in feeling,
that's how it feels

if you ever knew how much I loved him
you'd know whyy this is shattering
if you ever felt like I did with him
you'd understand whyy I let him do this.

Shattered Heartyou made your bed, now sleep in it
the most important girl in your life
will be next to you
and I'll be at home, alone with my thoughts.

atop the list of many things wrong with this picture
are the broken promises that don't bother you at all
the tears I shed, because of this stupid heart
being shattered across the floor, yet another time

by your hands not just dropping,
but throwing it to the ground
without a second thought
without a second glance

The Pretty Little Things.pretty little blade
with your sharp edge
and intriguing coolness
touch my skin

pretty color red
streams down my arm
as the skin splits open
giving way to the coolness

pretty flashing lights
of the abulance as it carries
the pretty little girl
with all the pretty color red
laying down below me.

Over And Over.as I sit here and listen to the lyrics
over and over
I relive the memories to each line
over and over
when do I get to be okay again?

as the tears stream my face
over and over
I caress my own cheeks
to rid them of the moisture
over and over

and not once do I honestly think
that he's thinking of me too
feeling the pain from these decisions
over and over.

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS REBEL T2i
Shutter Speed:1/4096 second
Aperture:F/3.5
Focal Length:21 mm
ISO Speed:1600
Date Taken:Oct 5, 2012, 8:52:07 PM
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Barnby ~SamanthaSkellington

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I'm doing a country type session at this barn next month! SO STOKED!

Critique by ~katelinjune Oct 9, 2012, 7:09:23 PM

I love the composition in this picture, everything is placed nicely and has a nice view. The only thing I would change when it comes to that is to not have awkward crops like you do on the top of the barn and the tree. The colors in this photograph are excellent. Maybe if you make the exposure a little higher and used an effect it could really give it the extra umpf. I like to use: picmonkey.com because I believe editing is a part of photography and why not do something to enhance your photo? The doors are my favorite part of the picture, the way the barn looks warn always gives a story behind a picture. Like they always say "a picture is worth a thousand words" and you defiantly nailed the impact and vision. I would work a bit on technique because that could really enhance your photos. This is a great shot though! -Katelin

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